I am now a small amount of dust
In the corner of black board on the dusk
I had taught the children good
For that they call me dude
I had drawn the diagram
of nose & lungs& diaphram
Some teachers thrown me for
Hitting the head of naughty four
I am a small amount of dust
In the cornor of black board on the dusk
Dusk means twilight. Insted of dusk it should have be desk. spelling of corner is also not correct. but you have a poetic sense and this is a good attempt to nursih it. keep writing. my best wishes. please try to correct it before posting.
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